Unlike the other two online m/m stories I've read, this is focused strictly on the romance, sex and dynamics between the main characters; not much of a plot otherwise. And I did find a few plot twists to be very convenient so that to ease the way between the heroes; I'd especially prefer the author to find another way to turn the tables instead of suddenly revealing that Sylvan used to be a dominant before they turned him into a submissive by force, which was something like an easy way out of their problem IMHO
. Also, was in the mood for something angsty and this was supposed to be one based on GR readers, but for someone like me who loves heartwrenching romances with a passion, this didn't quite fall in this category I'm afraid. All in all, I find myself a bit disappointed, not because it wasn't good, but because it wasn't what I expected it to be.